名师邵宁:2013考研英语二真题作文分析

来源:文都考研发布时间:2013-01-06

  今年英语二大作文是简单的现象原因型作文,与考前串讲的作文“模板一”内容吻合。相关话题很常见,也增加了今年考题的简单性和评分难度。该考题为图表作文,主要分析现象背后的原因而不是利弊,这是值得大家注意的一点。现在做原创模板和真题比对,相同处用红色笔写,不同处用黑色笔写。希望大家比对,祝考生马到成功!

  考前串讲讲义:

  模板一(原因型)

  Along with the advance of the society more and more social issues are brought to our attention, one of which is that (…description…) . (The phenomenon is so thought-provoking that I can’t help exploring the driving forces behind it.)

  Many factors that contribute to the phenomenon may be summarized as follows. Above all, with the rapid pace of modern society, there is an increasing demand for various modern ways of communication. According to a survey performed by socialists, almost 65% of the respondents regard X as their top priority, compared to 46 percent only a few years ago. What’s more, the rapid development of relevant industries promotes the emergence of X. Last but not the least, as the result of globalization, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude towards X, and regard it as a lifestyle.

  Based on the factors discussed above, all the analysis points to an unshakable conclusion. The trend does not exist in this single field, and it is bound to usher in a new era of relevant spheres. (Now that we have perceived it, we should take advantage of the opportunity to gain the upper hand in the competition of the modern world.)

  最后真题的大作文:

  Along with the advance of the society more and more social issues are brought to our attention, one of which is that the number of college students taking part-time jobs is increasing sharply with the increase of their grades. The freshmen doing part-time jobs account for 67.77 percent of the total, whereas the proportion of senior students is 88.24 percent.

  Many factors that contribute to the phenomenon may be summarized as follows. Above all, as the result of globalization, it is believed that students now take a more positive attitude towards part-time jobs, and regard it as a healthy and active lifestyle. According to a survey performed by socialists, almost 65% of the undergraduates regard part-time jobs as their top priority, compared to 46 percent only a few years ago. What’s more, the diversity of modern employment ways may bring about the drastic changes in old-fashioned concepts. Last but not the least, with the rapid pace of modern society, there is an increasing demand for various kinds of professional skills which can be learned from part-time jobs.

  Based on the factors discussed above, all the analysis points to an unshakable conclusion. The trend does not exist in this single field, and it is bound to usher in a new era of relevant spheres. (Now that we have perceived it, we should take advantage of the opportunity to gain the upper hand in the competition of the modern world.)

  备注:中间段的黑色笔句型也是在串讲课堂上所讲。比如:“take a more positive attitude towards”和“diversity of modern ways”等等。