托福写作五大准则（二）

　　对于托福写作考试，除了一个好的结构和例证之外，有些准则可以助你作文获得高分。这里小编为大家带来了托福写作5大准则，希望对大家的托福写作有帮助。

　　1. Avoid a succession of loose sentences

　　别写流水账，找找语言的逻辑关系，通过 who, which, when, where, and while 这些词把句子串起来。

　　2. Express co-ordinate ideas in similar form

　　Parallel structure 平行结构讲究对称美：内容对等，结构一致。

　　Eg: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method, while now the laboratory method is employed.

　　Parallel structure: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method; now it is taught by the laboratory method.

　　3. Keep related words together

　　词的位置决定词的关系，所以遵循‘物以类聚’，意思关联紧密的词放在一块。

　　A: 主谓之间不分割，补充信息需前置

　　Eg: Wordsworth, in the fifth book of The Excursion, gives a minute description of this church.

　　Eg: In the fifth book of the Excursion, Wordsworth gives a minute description of this church. ( 状语前置，主谓毗邻 )

　　B：关系代词紧随先行词出现

　　Eg: There was a look in his eye that boded mischief.

　　Eg: In his eye was a look that boded mischief. ( 名词 look 先行，关系词 that 紧随 )

　　4. In summaries, keep to one tense

　　总结通常使用现在时态，如果使用过去时，请保持时态一致。

　　5. Place the emphatic words of a sentence at the end

　　欲擒故纵的圆周句 ( periodic sentence ) 中，强调信息后置。

　　Eg: Four centuries ago, Christopher Columbus, one of the Italian mariners whom the decline of their own republics had put at the service of the world and of adventure, seeking for Spain a westward passage to the Indies as setoff against the achievements of Portuguese discoverers, lighted on America.

　　Eg: With these hopes and in this belief I would urge you, laying aside all hindrance, thrusting away all private aims, to devote yourselves unswervingly and unflinchingly to the vigorous and successful prosecution of this war.

　　以上便是小编为大家总结的五大准则，希望对大家有所帮助噢。

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