6月24日新四级作文点评

来源:沪江论坛发布时间:2006-06-27
大学生选课是个既新又老的话题,然而选择任课老师却是个新现象。这对学生而言毫无疑问是大有裨益的,但同时又让学生手足无措。大有裨益主要是因为学生有机会选择自己喜欢和认可的老师,手足无措主要是因为学生对大部分任课老师都不是很熟悉。




  基于以上情况,考生在安排作文时,首先在首段用两三句话介绍背景引出主题,然后可分一到两段阐述两到三个选择任课老师的理由,最后用一两句话阐述如此做法的益处,再用一两句话点出潜在的问题。

  具体写作步骤概略:

  首段

  可以考虑首句如此引出主题:Nowadays some universities entitle their students to the free choosing of teachers for some specific courses。接着,略加评论:This offers students a more flexible and thus more efficient way of learning. 然后,笔锋一转,指出学生选择老师的考虑因素:Nevertheless, there could be various reasons for a student to choose their ideal teacher.

  主体

  该部分关键在于给出几个较有代表性的理由,如:Most probably a student will choose a teacher who is expert at what he or she teaches. It is because …接着阐述其它理由,如:Next to it is that the teacher is well informed of how to teach. It is because…

  尾段

  总结其益处,如:Free choosing of teachers may bring to us many advantages, such as, …接着,指出问题,如:However, the problems it brings along also allows no negligence. For example, …

  总而言之,此次作文主题并不陌生,而且贴近大部分考生的学生生活。考生只要文章结构完整,论理充分,应该不会存在太大的问题。

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