作文题20.0分
英语

假设你是红星中学的学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英文写一篇周记, 记述上周日你和父母一起骑车郊游的过程。

注意:词数不少于60。

提示词: 郊区 the suburbs

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正确答案

Dear Peter,

I’m so excited to hear that youare coming to Beijingthis summer vacation. I just can’t wait to see you.

Regardingyour two choices of how to spend the day, I’d like to recommend the first, aone-day tour of the Great Wall. It’s said that he who does not reach the GreatWall is not a true man. As one of the symbols ofChina,this place of interest has been regarded as a must-see attraction, especiallyfor those who will visit Beijingfor only one day. Don’t worry about the tour guide. I can accompany youthroughout the day. We’re sure to have a good time.

I hope my suggestion will be ofsome help to you. If you have any other questions, just write to me.

 

Yours,

Li Hua

 

解析

情景作文:

  通过审文字,可知本篇情景作文为周记,主要内容是记叙上周日你和父母一起骑车郊游的过程。

  通过审图片,可以进一步将内容进行拓展:

  1. 出发:上周日天气晴朗,我和父母开心地骑着自行车来到郊外;

  2. 到达:到达后爸爸和我搭帐篷,妈妈将带上的食物摆在铺好的野餐布上;

  3. 玩:休息了一会儿之后,我和爸爸放风筝,妈妈在一旁观看;

  4. 看日落:时间过得很快,收拾好物品之后,我们坐在一块儿观看日落。

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 通过审文字,可知本篇情景作文为周记,主要内容是记叙上周日你和父母一起骑车郊游的过程。

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