作文题25.0分
英语

72.教育部征集高中生对于高中毕业后不直接上大学而是休整一年(gap year)的意见和看法。你作为光明中学的班长李华整理了同学们的意见并给教育部回信要点如下:

1. 同学们非常支持休整一年,希望拥有这一年的自由时光。

2. 同学们在这一年里准备做什么。

3. 度过休整年的优点。

注意: 

1. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;

2. 字数:100词左右。

Dear sir,

I’m Li Hua from Guang Ming Middle School. I’m writing to tell you 

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

解析

做为中学生,在课余要多阅读,对常见的热点话题要做到心中有数,再根据试卷上关于作文的提示,就可以很快构思,写作时要细心,尽力避免低级错误。

【参考范文】

Dear sir,

    I’m LiHua from Guang Ming Middle School. I’m writing to tell you what we high school students think of having the gap year.

    Above all, most of us students consider it a brilliant idea to have a gap year before we finally go to our dream college. Some students will travel around our country or even the whole world to relieve the tension and pressure caused by senior academic study. Others prefer to take some jobs so that they are able to make some money and be economically independent. Still others choose to read more books about their majors they are going to study in university.

    By doing what is mentioned above, we students will not only enrich our life and social experience but also temper our sense of independence. In one word, we can’t wait to spend the gap year in our own way.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

考查方向

本题考查了用英语表达自己观点以及对热点事件的了解能力。

解题思路

①这是一篇议论文,要求抒发自己对某一事件的观点并进行说明

②先表达同学们对这一事件的看法,再告诉同学们在这一年的计划,最后对gap year这一件事进行优缺点探讨。

③参考词汇及短语:a heated discussion about…; from our point of view, plan for , every coin has two sides, nevertheless, how come…

易错点

把握不准时态,语态以及人称的使用。