短文改错
Last month, I find that my little brother looked up to me. I noticed he started copying way that I was dressed. He even began copying my ways of speaking and greet my friends. At first, I thought that he was play jokes. So I yelled at him, “Knock it off ”. Much with my surprise, he burst in to tear. Then I realized that what
1.Last month, I find that my little brother looked up to me. I noticed he started copying way that I was dressed.
2. He even began copying my ways of speaking and greet my friends. At first, I thought that he was play jokes.
3.So I yelled at him, “Knock it off ”. Much with my surprise, he burst in to tear.
4.Then I realized that what he was doing those things just because he admired me.
5.To comfort my sadly brother, I took him to shop at the store of a blue shirt like me. Our mother smiled proud when we happily came back home in our shirts.
正确答案
1.Last month, I （find 改 found ）that my little brother looked up to me. I noticed he started copying（the） way that I was dressed.
解析
句首的last month,表明时态是一般过去时。
考查方向
动词时态
解题思路
时间状语是解决动词时态类题的关键
易错点
find的时态写错，写成finded.
教师点评
容易错，一般不会出错，关键是掌握时间状语。
正确答案
2.He even began copying my ways of speaking and （greet改greeting ）my friends. At first, I thought that he was （play改playing ）jokes.
解析
way 后用of doing sth, 并且and是连接两个doing 形式。
考查方向
非谓语动词
解题思路
way后非谓语动词的使用及并列词and连接发内容应一致。
易错点
把greet改为过去式greeted.
教师点评
注意英语里的and 应该连接两个并列成分，或叫一致性原则。
正确答案
3.So I yelled at him, “Knock it off”. Much （with改to） my surprise, he burst into（tear改Tears）.
解析
固定搭配to one's surprise, tear有复数形式是tears.
考查方向
surprise的固定搭配 以及名词tear作为眼泪的复数。
解题思路
记住固定搭配的短语和名词复数
易错点
固定搭配没记牢，找不到错误点； 或者tear作为“眼泪”的意思不知道它有复数形式。
教师点评
较难的两个点，基础差点的同学不容易发现，平时要多积累。
正确答案
4.Then I realized that what(去掉what ) he was doing those things just because he admired me.
解析
because引导原因状语从句，那它前面就应该是主句。主句应该是表结果，所以它应该是一陈述句，并且doing的宾语是those things，就不再需要what了，所以去掉what.
考查方向
引导宾语从句的引导词的选择
解题思路
宾语从句又带了原因状语从句。
易错点
去掉that 或者把what 改为why.
教师点评
比较难的一个题，注意搞清句子结构。
正确答案
5.To comfort my （sadly改成sad ）brother, I took him to shop at the store for a blue shirt like （me 改成mine）. Our mothersmiled （proud改成proudly ）when we happily came back home in our shirts.
解析
my ｓａｄｌｙ ｂｒｏｔｈｅｒ中，brother是名词，当然要用形容词来作定语； smileｄ ｐｒｏｕd中，smile是动词应该用副词proudｌy来修饰动词； a ｂｌｕｅ ｓｈｉｒｔ ｌｉｋｅ ｍｅ中，不可能说衣服像我，而应该是衣服像我的衣服，用名词性物主代词mine来表示my ｓｈｉｒｔ。
考查方向
形容词，副词以及代词的使用。
解题思路
形容词常作定语，定语和宾语补足语； 副词常用状语和定语补足语； 代词代替的内容一定要清楚。
易错点
形容词和副词的用法不清，找不到错误点。代词内容不清。
教师点评
基础要扎实，否则短文改错仍会是很多人的难点。不合情理的地方要多加留意。