72.假定你是李华,你计划去英国兰卡斯特大学参加为期六个月的语言培训。你想寄宿在学校附近的英国人家里。该大学网站上的一则广告引起了你的注意,但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请你给校发一封电子邮件,询问有关情况。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件的称谓和署名已为你写好。
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student from China and plan to learn English in Lancaster University for 6 months. I am writing in response to your advertisement. Here are a few things I’d like to clarify.
Firstly, how can I get to the University from my host home? Secondly, would I have a separate room of my own? And are there any children in the family? It would be beneficial if I have someone of a similar age living with me. Also I’s like to know if they have any special customs. Lastly, I wonder what is included within the fees in the ad, and whether it should be paid monthly or weekly.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
略
1. 这是一篇书信,应该遵守书信的格式要求。
2. 结构上,首先进行自己介绍,说明写信的目的。第二段对照题目要求中箭头所指的几项逐条展开,几项之间要恰当地适应连接词,比如firstly, secondly, also, lastly,使文章结构紧凑。
3. 在提出询问时,要注意语言的得体性,尽量使用比较客气的表达方式,比如I’d like to …; how can I ...?; It would be beneficial if …; I wonder …等。
1. 书信的格式错误。
2. 向别人询问信息时语言不够委婉客气。
3. 语言表达不够正确。