作文题25.0分
英语

52.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack因爸爸过度饮酒而感到非常苦恼,就此请你用英语给他写一封邮件。主要内容包括:1)表示安慰:2)给出建议;3)寄予希望。

注意:

1)词数100左右;

2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;

3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

【参考范文】

Dear Jack,

   I’m sorry to hear that your father is addictedto drinking. I can understand how you feel. It must be a big problem for yourfamily, and it may disturb your daily life. As his son, it’s normal for you togive him your concern. However, you shouldn’t become upset about it. Certainly,you should try your best in your spare time to help him get rid of drinkinglittle by little. Meanwhile, you can ask some doctors and experts for moreprofessional help. Making some rules for him to follow is another way you cantry.

   We know quitting drinkingis very different, so you should give him time and care. I wish your fathercould give up drinking with your help and become healthier and happier.

   Best wishes, I’m lookingforward to your reply.

                                                                             Yours,

                                                                            Li Hua

解析

本文是篇电子邮件,要求结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,文中用一些各种高级从句和插入语,以及连接词等,以增加亮点。

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何写信的知识点。

解题思路

这是一篇书信格式的文章。主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在

时为主。

首先是表示同情并安慰; 其次提出建议; 最后寄予希望。一方面,要注意

文章的结构,可用三段式,合理布局,层次分明;另一方面,文中可以有意用一些高级词汇、从句和插入语等,为文章增加亮点。

词数100词左右 , 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;注意书信格形。

易错点

格式错误,这是一电子邮件,写作时不要逐句翻译,注意准确运用时态,语态,上下文意思连贯。