作文题25.0分
英语

39.高考在即,你发现班级中有的同学的压力很大,平时不眠不休拼命做题。请在校英语报上,就此现象,结合自己的经历,写一篇100-120个词的短文,向大家宣传正确的应试态度和做法。(开头已给出,不计入总字数)

We Should Lessen the Test Anxiety

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正确答案

We Should Lessen the Test Anxiety

As the College Entrance Examination draws near, quite a few of my classmates suffer much pressure. Some of them bury themselves in endless homework day and night against the clock, which robs them of happiness and does them harm physically and mentally.

Although pressure, to some extent, can provide motivation, too much pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a student’s confidence. More seriously it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors.

Considering the great damage of excessive pressure, we should learn how to relieve pressure. First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves so as to make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. Second, we’d better squeeze out some time for fun such as listening to music. Sometimes even crying is an efficient way to release stress. Finally, if you find pressure is nearly beyond your control, you’d better turn to professional psychological guidance.

解析

根据题目要求,可以写成三段式的文章。要注意要点齐全,语言准确。

考查方向

本题考查了考查根据所给要求进行写作的能力。

解题思路

(1)这是一篇半开放性作文,题目限定了写作的内容,但是没有给出要点,需要考生结合自己的经历补充有关的要点。

(2)文章可以采用三段式作文。第一段提出问题,第二段分析压力过大的危害,第三段给考生提出如何减少压力的建议。

(3)参考词汇:埋头做某事bury oneself in doing sth, 夜以继日地,day and night,剥夺了某人的某物rob sb of sth, 对某人身心有害harm sb physically and mentally,在一定程度上 to some extent 鉴于considering,释放压力relieve pressure,挤出时间squeeze out some time.

易错点

1. 遗漏要点;

2. 没有分段,导致文章结构不合理;

3. 语言表达不够准确。